Yes I did not bother to edit because it just came out this way so I leave it in original form. I felt very light and my vibration changed suddenly so I closed the eyes and listened and when I opened, the mind had stopped and there I observed the breath and saw how it came in and out and undulated gently. I rode the ripples and waves and became the breath. I even saw where it turns from the in breath into an outbreath and how right before coming back out it stops for the tiniest fraction before going out again. It felt as if something larger than me was breathing me, as opposed to me doing the breathing.
Perhaps you inspired me because the first 15-20 lines came all at once like a photograph and also with the audio, where I saw and heard all lines at once and the fingers just had to type fast to get it all so there was no chance for thinking. The mind sometimes tells me to edit and change and be a perfectionist but I have learned to let it flow even with errors and inconsistencies as they all align in time when I trust and let it go...
She, is 'she' who inspires me, who lights the fire, who breathes the breath of life through me and makes my soul live, she who gives respiration....some would say a muse....some would say the mother of all living, janaki/sita/ashera/shekinah/shakti, divine feminine aspect.....she knows who she is...yes it is also likened to our children removed from the womb and taking that first breath unassisted and feeling alive.
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